Hi guys,

today we corrected your songs about the Phantom of the Opera. Here are your stanzas:

Hidden under your mask, you look at us
But we cannot see you, reveal yourself
We cannot make you trust, you look disturbed
The Phantom of the Opera's hidden under his mask

You say it's amazing when you love me
Darkness and romance too, it's a daydream
Touch me, trust me, savour each sensation
With you everything's a sweet poison, you take my heart

The poor soul is in love with a woman
She's kind enough you see to like this beast
She's beautiful, she's grace, she's joined the dark
But look at him he's a mess, he's not blessed; love's dangerous

In this very dark night, he takes my soul
In his troubling splendour, takes my power
His mysterious magic came in my dream
The Phantom of the Opera is here, he takes my heart

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Homework:

- finir votre chanson pour ceux qui n'auraient rien rendu aujourd'hui....!!!! Et j'attends aussi toujours pour certains vos tâches finales (animal in danger...!). Attention, des zéros vont pleuvoir.