• Travail d'écriture et de mise en forme de l'histoire inventée (et illustration) grâce à l'application "Google Slides".
    Ce travail sera terminé la prochaine fois.


    Homework:

    Pensez à bien écrire l'intégralité de l'histoire (voir le cours + inventer d'autres moments / dialogues pour finir l'histoire).

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  • "What the fudge are you doing here?" she asks / they ask

    "Oh my Gosh! What did you do? Why did you eat my mother and daughter?" he says, scared and wakes him up.

    "Oh shoot...! I'm sorry! It was not my intention / It was not food...!", the wolf says embarrassed.

    "Help us, please!" they cry / shout / scream from inside the wolf's stomach.

    ...

    (to be continued)

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  • The New Story of LRRH:

    The wolf is* a pet in the family.
    The father doesn't want to kill him.
    When the wolf eats* the grand-mother and LRRH, he is* sleepwalking...
    First, the father pets the wolf...
    Then he jumps on his stomach. But it doesn't work.
    He waits... but it doesn't work...
    Finally, he tickles the wolf. The animal sneezes the grand-mother and LRRH out of his nostrils!
    And they live happily ever after.

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    "Atishoo!" -> "bless you"

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    Homework:
    - créer 5 illustrations pour l'histoire créée en classe (par ex: 1 pour le début / 3 pour le milieu / 1 pour la fin). Elles devront être de qualité, réalisées sur papier blanc pour être ensuite publiées! Appliquez-vous!
    - la prochaine fois nous travaillerons sur le développement des dialogues + des descriptions de lieux / atmosphère.

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  • Study of the real story in English with a text and its audio version.

    How to subvert a fairy tale and change some elements to make it fun!

    Simplified version of the story (recap):
    Little Red Riding Hood goes to visit her grandmother.
    She meets a wicked wolf in the forest and speaks with him.
    The evil wolf eats the grandmother. He doesn't chew her but gobbles her up.
    The father kills the wolf and the family is safe. 

    Changes made in the story:
    The scene takes place at the grand-mother's house directly. The wolf is not wicked but very nice. He is actually a pet of the family.
    He doesn't eat the grandmother and LRRH intentionally. He suffers from sleep-walking.
    When the father discovers the wolf's problem, he doesn't kill him but pats him on the head and comforts him.
    He tries to find a solution to save his family without killing the animal.
    1- He jumps on his stomach... but it doesn't work.
    2- He tickles him very hard... but it doesn't work.
    3- He tries to make him vomit... but it doesn't work.
    4- He waits... but it doesn't work.
    5- Finally, he rubs a feather under the wolf's nose. The wolf sneezes so hard that the grand-mother and LRRH come out of his nostrils.
    In the end, the family feels disgusted but everyone is safe.

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