Frankenstein - correction (Space)

Hi guys,

bravo to Inès F. who really did a GREAT job at modifying the monster of Frankenstein's birth so well. Here is the "correction" that you could get inspiration from:

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Frankenstein: rewrite the excerpt with a « space » tone

      And then I woke up. In my spaceship, I looked by the window and saw the most beautiful view you can see in a man’s life. I saw the Earth, so little and insignificant.

      The atmosphere was very calm, as if everything were far: those stupid humans, this noisy NASA, even this launch pad… Nothing was important and I was completely blissful.

      Serene; until I saw it sitting up. This monster, shooting lasers with his frozen eyes, and moving like a robot. He had an alien skin color, emphasizing his bizarre look but tears of joy were running on my cheeks and down my spacesuit. I was proud, like a mother admiring her new born child.

      “I – am – your – son” were the first words he said in an incredibly deep voice… At that moment, it was like swimming in a river of happiness, contemplating Saturn through the window.

Inès F.